Pink Lips - Comments

August...he's a special little bee isn't he?
Scout's not so different for allowing all of it to happen, but...I blame August?
my mind likes that "logic"
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First of all, I want to say that I’m glad you didn’t make this one exactly the same as the other one. I’m glad this one had a bit more plot to it. It was really nice to read about parents accepting their son being gay instead of them hating him for it, and I loved that part. I could also see where it was going; of course August would be angry over that one. When Scout walked in and he could sense August being so angry, you had my heart racing. I love how you describe Scout’s feelings and reactions so well. Also, I forgot to mention this on the other oneshot, but I loved how you ended it. I can say the same for this one. Once more, excellent job!

<3 Haven

I must say I have enjoyed both "Red Lips" and "Pink Lips" to the height of enjoyment. The way Scout refers to not only himself but the relationship as a whole as well as August is so hauntingly beautiful, I just want to read more and more and more about them because you can't tell if it really is love or just a twisted sort of devotion, so I really love that about this series ^-^ (and if there's to be more I'm super stoked for that)