A Boy's Love Affair - Comments

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH :]
It is so incredibly sexy, I can not get enough of it!
Update soon, please?
xx

update

dude i love you for just updating. update

I forgot please :p

Im pretty sure 3 weeks was a month ago. Update soon.

LOVED IT! UPDATE OMGOMGOMG BOBBY AND TRISTAN FTW!! :D :D :D excited for the next update!!!!

i love your story i was laughing so hard. you have no idea anyway your final choices are in my signature. and good luck on your tests

oh my. . .

UM that is a pweaty BIG turning point didnt see it coming damn hehe you so dont like sechs chapters do you J I N X's

Next Chapter Pwetty Pwetty Please J I N X I love your story

Your descriptions seem a little plain and thin. Here is what I do when getting the scenery ready for my characters entrance. I describe it from a distance, e.g. blankets of rain fall from the colourless sky. Then I describe it up-close, e.g. tiny teardrops leak of the sad leafless tress. Last but not least I describe it from my characters POV, e.g. the rain pats me on the head as if I did a good job or something. So if I am describing snowing mountains from a distance this is how I would do it.

Pale blue shark teeth bite the distant horizon. The crowd of mountains that gather together not far from my village are blocking the new morning sun as usual. But without the mountains there would be no stream passing through the village. From the village the mountains look calm and beautiful, something you’d only see once in your lifetime, but from where I stand I don’t have much life left. The mountain shrieks and blows at us with such incredible force as we make our way up the snowy slope. My heart is so cold and frighten it’s using my lungs for a blanket to hide in. My beard is sprinkled with snow flakes and frozen spit that uncontrollably dribbles from my lips. I wish I’d never thought of climbing to the top of the mountain, but turning back will mean death.

I hope this helps and you finish your book!

I adore this story :DD
Keep writing.!
-Evelyn Rosee

hey dude what happened to one of the best slash stories ive ever read even though u havent updated in a long time i still check my email everyday and go to the summary page just in case somehow i didnt get an email please update!

I like this....I like this quite a lot

more please:D

Bahaha SEX SEX SEX! Ahh, makes me laugh. Update?

i don't think it was awkwardly written, but it's not right. if you're having a threesome, it a bit of foreplay, sex and then an orgasm and you're out. if you don't know how to do something, you should probably research, since that's probably what a boy in that situation would do if he's wanting it.

lol and the ~exciting~ gay friends. they're fun just like any other friend until you piss them off because you assume they're a shopping buddy.

love it:D
hope you recover quickly:D

I didnt know talk stood for that lol.

wow great story really love it