Sleeping Beauty - Comments

  • Alphabet Soup

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    I thought you had a nice balance with the story.
    A nice introduction to justify why Sean had Somnophilia. It wasn't long, but not extremely short, and then you got right into the story. The story itself is simple yet complex enough. Simple to where you don't have to be explaining all different thing. It takes place in one room with the side of one person (until the end), and you did it very well.

    Bravo to you, and good luck with the contest.
    April 10th, 2011 at 07:20pm
  • Hunt The Haunted

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    Smood love!
    So, you finally started the Smood challenge then? Good luck!
    Oh, and y'know that picture of Gus at the end, is it just me that thinks standing up against a wall like that makes him look like some sort of high priced prostitute?
    :fail:
    Love the story Ali.
    April 10th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • anders.

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    Mmmmmmmmm.
    I love these two. <3
    April 9th, 2011 at 11:33pm