Ezzy - Comments

I guess I'll keep making your day sir. (:

I just read the whole thing through and I gotta say you have me HOOKED. :3
Hopefully more soon? (:

This is amazing, more soon?

How 'bout leaving it at Ezzy? Cause to be honest, that's what grabbed my attention... I love the title, its so simple and personally I think that's what mibba needs, simple titles, less of the million word essays.

Ezzy is an awesome title, I don't think it needs another one. The story is brilliant. I think the saying "Don't judge a book by its cover" comes into play here :)

OR!!!! Sooner or later, this will be all she knows

-combined titles of Sooner or Later, & All She Knows.

May i predict something?
Jack likes Ezzy; Ezzy doesn't know it yet---or is in denial--- but she likes Jack as well. Why else would she feel "sparks" when they held hands? :3 She might turn out to be bi. As will Jack.

Story title(most are song titles,)
- Sparks fly. -----lame, i know, but, ehh-----
- Wrong with me -----add words into that, maybe-----
- Scream ----addd words into that, too----
- Less is more (not a song title)
- All or nothing into your arms ----(two song titles combined. All or nothing & into your arms)
- Breakdown of Ezzy(or her full name/first full name)(not a song title)
- You jump, I jump (not a song title)
- Who I am hates who I've been
- Please don't go
- Second time around (maybe she tries to re-do some stuff with her parents/jack's parents. and other stuff..)
- Ezzy wonders(not a song title)
- A mess it grows
- Going under
- All these things I hate
- All she knows ( i think this is my favorite)
- Sooner or later

i wish they were more original. but they're songs from my iTunes.... they're the ones that stood out the most.

Yeah I get what you mean about story titles. I'm like that but I totally suck at them.
Hmm jack is being fairly interesting xO

its getting better maybe the stories name could be 'life on the verge of tears' or 'just trying to live another day as Ezzy'

maybe you could name itt,
"As you're leaving, I'm breaking"

iddkk. xD

i really love this story. seriously. :3

I suck at story titles Dx. Sorry I'm no help there
bright side, Jack is back and that totally rhymed xD

O.O :OOOOOOO

This is really good! I really liked chapter 15, too. :3

it just seems to get more amazing as the story develops <3 keep up the good work girls :)

i say , hes falling in love with her :3

i want character pictures. :3 it'd help me, because i CANNOT make pics in my mind with this story. :(
if you do get pics, PLEASE don't make them scene people, they're too.. toooo. haha.
i really love this.

This is amazing. I've been through the shit she's going through, I'm not lesbian, I'm bisexual. Though for me some people learned to deal with it. My school is supportive of it, my family not so much. Loving the story girls.

Usually not into this type of stories but I love it! Keep the updates comin'.

He's gay but hasn't admitted it! Boo, and here I thought, he was going to concoct a plan (made by a dare by a joke) to see if he could turn her straight. Oh well. x/

why would her dad think she use it?