Each Vibrant Memory - Comments

Good start of a story :) I'm curious about that school now. Wonder why everyone acts so strange... Something's going on there... can't wait to read more. I've only read the first chapter. You have great grammar and the story is easy to read. Good job :)

this is soo good. i cant wait to see what happens next. :)

This... this is so well done. I've only read the first two chapters but I'm hooked. The characters are so real, and the writing is actually sophisticated. It's nice to find a truly amazing story on here.

OhhMyGoodness do I love this story!!! This is far the most amazing most interesting story I have ever read! I love you for making this story!! I seriously can't wait for more, I need more!!!! I just got addicted to this story just to let you know! (:

I love this, can't wait for more!

I love the ending of the first chapter :) I like endings like that. I thought this had great detail. A little longer than I like to read but intriguing.

Great job with making me feel like I truly was the character!

This is written really well, but the plot line seems a little too... familiar.