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  • abyssopelagic;

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    so cutee(: love it!

    btww cud you check out my marc staal story called A Stranger In Pardise
    June 10th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Loved it.
    June 10th, 2011 at 08:02am
  • FlyingBirdd.

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    I love it c:
    June 10th, 2011 at 07:28am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    okay just found this and I LOVE it. Keep it up =)
    May 16th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • abyssopelagic;

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    love this story! please update soon(:
    May 15th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • ray8788

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    love it, update soon please :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 03:04pm
  • hkychk

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    Totally wasn't expecting Jordan's dad to not like her just by looking at her and not knowing anything about her lol Love it and update soon please!!!
    p.s. Parker was super cute! lol
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:21am
  • kendra-rae

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    I really like it, I think it is cute and I also think Jordan's dad just needs to get to know Katie!
    Can't wait for the chapter :)
    May 13th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • Cupcake1

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    Great story! Definitely wasn't expecting that reaction from Henry though
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I wasn't expecting that from Jordan's dad. Anyway, I'm looking forward to what happens next.
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:18pm
  • Catharine.

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    :'( Awwwh I feel bad for her! Jordy's dad is a bit of a douche! Can't wait for more cuteness! <3
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • temporarylove

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    I really like this. I'd love to see where it goes. I'd kinda wanna see some more fights though. Hahahha. :)

    Keep on. :)
    May 12th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • tj oshie.

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    this is super cute :) i love it. one of my favorite parts is that A. Katie is actually normal height ahha. it drives me a little crazy sometimes when people always make their character like 4'8. :/ and B. i love love love that you give us both perspectives ahah. i tried before and failed miserably
    April 13th, 2011 at 11:51am
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