Commitorum Metus - Comments

... this is fantastic. I love the impatience and how Frank just wants his Gerard to be there and talking to him through the computer and how they're totally a couple without being a couple so far. Do Gee and Frank live near one another, both in Jersey? I'm just curious about the webcam thing, yanno?

Frakn's nervousness with commitment is adorable. He clearly loves Gerard, but he doesn't want to mess him up because he loves him that much and it's adorable. I wish Frank could just drop work and go to him, yanno? It's a snapshot in a moment of time of two people who love each other and admit it, but won't act on it. It takes only a few minutes and it works and I'm gonna have to go creep on more of your stuff now if it's written like this, :)

I really, really liked this piece. The concept was so simple but it was just so well-written. I could really relate to Frank's character, especially at this moment in time, and he just seemed so... real. Really, I don't know what else I can say, other than that this was really, really good and the title in particular was quite unique. (: