Shores of California - Comments

I adore every second of each chapter. Post more soon before I go crazy! :P

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I, like those few below me, also do not care very much for any of the Jonas brothers.

But none the less, I gave your story a chance. You have a good plot, and I love the layout, it's cute. I also couldn't find any grammar errors nor spelling errors.

If I was a Jonas fan, I would say I loved it. It's good, but I'm not a fan.

I'm from the comment swap, too and like the last 3 I don't like the jonas brothers at all and I also don't like boyxgirl stories. And I don't really get the plot... it's a bit confusing to me. Though your grammar and spelling were good and the layout is decent and nice to read.

I'm from the comment swap, too and like the last 3 I don't like the jonas brothers at all and I also don't like boyxgirl stories. And I don't really get the plot... it's a bit confusing to me. Though your grammar and spelling were good and the layout is decent and nice to read.

Hey, hey, comment swap brought me here :)
Hum... I'm gonna have to agree with the comments bellow on the part that I'm not really into Jonas Brothers. I mean, I don't hate them, but I don't really care about them either. :/
Anyways, I thought your writing style was good. There were no grammar or spelling mistakes noticed by me.
I didn't get too attached to the characters, though, but maybe that was because I'm out of my 'comfort zone' when it comes to fandoms.
Overall, I think you did a great job. The story line is good and I wish you continue with the good job :)

Hi, I'm from comment swap. And, yeah, I kind think a bit like the comment below? I read bandslash and boyxboy haha. Though, I don't really hate the Jonas Brothers, I'm just not interested in their life and personality, although a few of their songs are actually quite good.
I'm not going to lIE I FUCKING LOVE THIS. Ok just I don't know, I want to read more, the way Lilly stays distant in the first chapter and Nick's trying to play tough (THE LIP LICKING THIIIIING). I just actually, read it, um, changing the names and faces hah, don't hit me. I'm reading it as a boyxboy hope you don't mind?
So yeah I subscribed and I am going to go further than the first chapter now, bye c:

Commet swap child here. c: I'm just going to come out and say this, this was not the right story for me. I hate the jonas brothers and boy/girl stories (Slash is my addiction.) Um, I didn't mind your writing though, it was simple and easy to read. Nice. I don't really get your plot... and it kind of threw me off when that girl was falling all over nick when she didn't even know him a second. It wasn't bad, just not my cup of tea. Good job though, keep writing C:

Your stories are my favorite.
Waiting on an update <3

Loved the update! Sorry for the delay in commenting. :/
Aw, Joe was being sweet to her. That's cute. :) But he's right; Nick is stupid for being with that Chelsea girl. lol. That girl is like, mean to everyone besides Nick. :/
Great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Love your stories
can't wait for your next updates

Hm... I think I remember this story. ;) Haha, and I'm really happy that you're rewriting it. I thought it was good before, but I really can't wait to see what you have in store this time around. :)
Definitely... subscribed! :D