My Collection of One-Shots - Comments

  • brianna7x

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    Jeez, I don't think you're capable of writing even a slightly bad story.... xD
    I was so drawn in to these....especially the last one. Wowwww.
    August 17th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • pat semetary;

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    I am SOOOO glad you posted the Ghost of You and Me on here(: and I'm really glad you wrote it for me in the first place. And everyone is right! It should be a full-length story, 'cause it's really good!

    And so are the rest; they're amazing XD
    August 13th, 2011 at 01:21am
  • Serenity Starr

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    these are BRILLIANT! More please. they are amazing! :DD x
    May 20th, 2011 at 12:50pm
  • ambery94

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    Loved all that I read so far (: I subscribed for sure, and I'd like to say that you should most definitely make a story based on the first one-shot. It was too original and sweet (: Though they're all kickass :D
    May 20th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • Avngd7XGirl

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    you're one shots keep getting better and better :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • Avngd7XGirl

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    you're one shots keep getting better and better :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Why are you so good?
    GAH ! :)
    May 15th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • leaving for good

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    OMFG seriously your one shots just keep getting better and better. I am addicted and your one shots are my drug<3 I love them and I seriously thought she was going to die, but then he dropped the bullet and I almost cried! AMAZING!
    May 14th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    I really like all of your short stories and when I finish some, i'm like continue, I wanna know what happens next. Some make me cry, some make my heart stop and smile and others make my mouth drop.
    May 14th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • kalisweetblood

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    whoa scary
    May 14th, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • Jazz1617

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    Damn. I really thought she was going to die. You really got me with that one. haha. Great twist at the end. :)
    May 14th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • Avngd7XGirl

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    Chica, I love all these twist in your one-shots XD
    May 4th, 2011 at 07:47am
  • leaving for good

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    Okay, my heart dropped when Evie said she was getting married to Zacky. This needs to be a story, not just a one shot, a story. I loved it, and please consider making it a story, and if you do please let me know. Again, amazing one shot I just can't get enough. (:
    April 30th, 2011 at 04:44pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    I love these one shots, but I think that Twist & Break Me and Ghost of You and Me should be expanded into full-length stories. Especially Ghost of You and Me. Soooo good and that cliff hanger-like ending is just killing me! I can't believe he did that. I assumed he meant to forget about it completely, but I didn't expect him to ask her best friend to marry him. That's fucked up.
    April 30th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • ChrissyVengeance6661

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    Zacky was being a bitch but I still love him:D And I cant wait for more they are still amazing :D
    April 30th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Sweet jesus, this needs to be a story.
    One chapter isn't enough ! Haha !
    April 30th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • Jazz1617

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    Ouch. Poor Calyx. But another great oneshot! :)
    April 30th, 2011 at 12:09am
  • kalisweetblood

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    lol now we can get zacky and have a octomom field day! :D
    April 29th, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • Avngd7XGirl

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    Ooo I think this is my favorite one shot so far
    April 27th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • kalisweetblood

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    note to self : get in a car crash with johnny christ fake amnesia and DONT reveal the truth until im pregnant
    April 27th, 2011 at 03:11am