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  • xX.Love_or_Death.Xx

    xX.Love_or_Death.Xx (100)

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    thanks:) im totally new 2 this ill make sure ill do that
    April 12th, 2011 at 02:13pm
  • DocHollidayIsBoss

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    I suggest using paragraphs- separating the bits so it's not one huge block. Other than that it looks great =]
    April 12th, 2011 at 07:48am
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