Trapped In A World Of Yesterdays - Comments

Oh my Glob.
Mind blown, over here.
This is a really unique plot and I find every aspect of this story incredibly fascinating. What inspired this? It's simply incredible.
And I wouldn't mind the palm reading, haha.

So it seems that Frank is about to embark on quite the treacherous journey then and gain something positive from it. I always find Tarot readings a b it vague, there are too many ways to interpret them, as Angel's reading highlights. I love how sceptical Frank was through all of it, but considering her garb, she had totally made a mockery of it. Though I would have loved to have seen the palm reading, that could have been interesting.

So soul levels and Scorpio's... Being more attuned to past lives... Is it perhaps a nod to the theory about the amount of soul a person has, that 23 pounds thing? Those with more soul are more spiritually aware. Gah, I honestly have no idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Its amazing that you two are going to be updating more regularly, my questions will get answered faster, woo!

YEAH! You're gonna update more?! =D THAT'S AWESOME!
I really love this spiritual shit that´s going on ^^ I can't wait to actually find out what's happening with Frank.
LOVE THIS! <3

did you just say REGULAR UPDATES??!?!?!??!?!?!???!?!?!!!!!?!?!?!?
OHHH YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Im soo excited because I love this story
You see I have experience in paranormal shit and am a person who feels and sometimes can see and hear like spirits
I get these feelings Frank gets everyday
I love reading it and going
'OHH IVE DONE THAT!!' or "Whoa....I know how he feels' type of shit
So yeah...
update?
because I love yous guys!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
ALWAYS FOLLOW YOUR FEELINGS OTHERWISE YOU GET IN TROUBLE!!

thats so cool ive always wanted my cards read

Yay you're back!!!

I thought this story was done for good ):

I love the update btw (:

cant wait for the next one

Yahoo you're back!!
Gah, I want moar! naow!!

Yeeeeeeeees you're back. WoooooooHooooooo

Woot! I have missed this story...it's really good and very well written :D can't wait for more updates :)

sdfghjklm I really like this story (:

omg omg omg I swear this is the most intriguing story ive read on mibba in such a long time. like, i know of other awesome storues on here, but this one is so....mysterious i guess is the word im looking for. I just cant seem to stop reading!!!
even though you only have four (well technically five) chapters up, I just know that this is gonna keep me hooked for a longggg time!!!!
so, with that said, pleasepleaseplease update again VERY SOON!!!!!!

This is really good and well written! I wonder what's wrong w/ Bob tho he acts like such an ass...well anyway cnt wait til the next update I wonder what's up w/ the fortune teller chick

Fuuucck.
I wanna know what's in the damn box. D:
Update quick? Please. <3
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I have added this on my list of favorite stories, and stories that I love! I adore the plot line so far! I love how observant everyone is! I love that i has to deal with the paranormal and other worldly stuff, it sparks on of my key fascinations and completely zones in on it. I quite literally look and feel like a child who is interested in magic and has just found out that they have witch/warlock/sorcerer blood an they will be taunt how to do spells, potions, etc. that day! Excited? Yes. Satisfied with the chapters? Very! Curious? Extremely. On the edge of your seat? About to fall the fuck off! Eep! O.O
I love both of your writing! Gosh, where to start? Your vocabulary- beyond your years and baffling, in the best of senses, of course. Your descriptions- vivid, and extremly detailed, but not overly so. I could see the movie of it in my head (one o the best perks in reading, a sense of imagination, both supplied to the reader, and the reader has to use their own =] ). You give your story life with the way you word things, it is absolutely magnificent! The length- or-fucking-gasmic!!!!!!
I can not wait for the next update, and thank you so much for this one!

Okay, I probably shouldn't have started reading this at midnight because I got hooked, and I just could not stop reading! You guys have some talent for drawing a reader in and really capturing their attention, bravo!

First of all, an amazing idea, seriously, I always admire supernatural type stories as I'm really rather useless at writing them, and it takes a lot of skill to drip feed ideas and plots to readers without them even realising. Four chapters in and I have a few ideas as to what may be up with Frankie. May I share? I think it's a past life he's seeing, and the violence is how he died, and the soulmate, the wonderful guy he connected to, is reincarnated as Gerard... how wrong an I? I don't even care! Stories that make me guess get me weak at the knees.

I love Bob. I don't know why, he's such a little bitch and its quite hilarious, with all his stature and presence and he's just whining about Frank, it's just funny. Ray's real cute too, I like his 'bookish' kind of character you've created, he's interested about Frank on an 'intellectual' level and I love how he keeps wanting to help and Gerard keeps shooting him down.

I can't help but think these guys make no money with this store. It's just dead, it's probably just draining funds from them keeping it open. I hope they feel like they're doing something worthwhile then, lol.

Why would a fortune teller go to the trouble of saving information about a boy for fifteen odd years? What's in the box? What has she got to tell Frank? Where will this lead us?

So intrigued, can not wait!

I really like this story. It's so intriguing how Frank's condition isn't even a known illness, and how he always goes with his gut because he just knows that's the right thing. I love how this story isn't all bland and same-old-high-school-fanfiction, it's got a plot, characters, and personalities of said characters.

Woo!:D Wonderfulness!!:D I'm like
DYING to know what his reading
says... And I just love how Ray acts
after hearing another one of Frank's
symptoms... Gerard's all "No Ray,
just no..." awwww poor Ray:P But
very awesome how he's interested
by Frank and his weirdness:) oooo
Gee was totally momentarily jealous
of bar dude:} He's all "Oh hell no...
oh wait, that's right, I'm engaged to
be married and I love Heather. i love
Heather. I love Heather Yeah you
keep telling yourself that Kid" haha
Yeah, i realize I'm freaken weird but
it's really more interesting to share my
very odd thoughts with you guys:) Oh,
did I mention how grateful i am that both
of you write uber long... It totally makes the
killer wait sooooooooo worth it... You guys
always give the best chapters:D

xo
Anita:)

I'm glad you updated! And I really want to read more O.O I was like, really into the story, and suddenly, it stopped! D= I want to know what will happen at the fortune teller so badly... You've got me hooked on this story x]

More soon? 0=D

I'm so glad you updated this. I missed it so much. I love how gerard and frank are finally getting into each others minds.absolutely wonderful.

Whoooooo, I can't wait 'til Jay-Jay gets the next chapter on :3
This update was so awesome, and it made me desire more! :D
Please, more soon!

XO