Like an Angel - Comments

D'aw.
It was...............
beautiful isn't a word strong enough to describe it.

Yet again, Miss Dru, you have reduced me to tears. It's hard to put into words how hauntingly beautiful this was. I can't wait to read more of your delightfully twisted prose.

Wow...that was amazing.
I am utterly speechless.
You are a fantastic author.

OH MY GOGH!!!!!
this story is...AMAZING!
ur use of words are incredible!!!
plz update soon!

That was bloody amazing. How you turned something so fucked up into something so beautiful; how Gerard's personality's so contradicting and somehow, twistedly beautiful.

This was my favourite line: But I'm beautiful, right? Like an angel? Like a dark angel with black feathers on its wings, too much eyeliner, and too much emotion. I'm a dark angel. I'll fly away from this.

This story's really really amazingly written.

I want to, like, slaughter myself right now. I cannot believe I haven't read this before. This has got to be one of the most perfect stories I've come across on this site.

But I'm beautiful, right? Like an angel? Like a dark angel with black feathers on its wings, too much eyeliner, and too much emotion. I'm a dark angel. I'll fly away from this.

"I'm not sick. It's so beautiful, Mikey. You don't understand. The blood's beautiful. The pain's beautiful. I'm beautiful. I'm a beautiful dark angel with feathers on my wings."

You ruin everything you touch. Yourself, Bert, those stupid drawings, your brother. You're not an angel, you're just a sorry excuse for a human being. You're hideous. Look at yourself with those circles under your eyes, those cuts on your fingers, your bones sticking out as if you were a Holocaust victim. You're disgusting. There's nothing good about what you are. You're a sin, a walking blaspheme.

Cliché endings are cliché only because they make everyone happy.

"But you'd be even more beautiful if you were happy again."

These were my favorite lines. But I absolutely loved everything about it; how even the fucked-upness can seem so beautiful, with the bloody drawings and the comparisons to black-winged angels.

I'm utterly speechless to say anything else. I give this a 100/10. Phenomenal job; I've read some of your fics and knew already you were a great writer, but I just frickin' adored this! Thank you for sharing your talent with us on Mibba. :) Thank you.

That was amazing.

You're so talented! Everyone of your stories I've read, I've Loved! <3<3

It's awsome!:)

Amazingly written. No errors that I see so far. Plz continue.