Let's Kill Tonight - Comments

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I absolutely loved this. The summary definitely caught my attention and I actually like how their names are very similar to each other. Their relationship you can tell has been going on for a while and the interactions between them are extremely realistic.
Humor definitely played a part in the first chapter. The opening line made me smile, because it was very subtle but yet attention getting. I definitely think that this can go somewhere and it has amazing potential! subbing.

The part in the summary about how they appear whenever anyone says their name really caught my attention. Made me wonder exactly how they could do that.

The first chapter was really short, but in a good way. It kept my attention, and the cliffhanger at the end made me want to read more. I really like this! :)

And you leave at a cliffhanger?! :O Are they going to go out an kill people together O.O''

Anyway, I like the relationship between Sally and Sully. Not to mention, the closeness in their names I find rather adorable lol. I'm really curious to see what is up with the couple exactly; I'm quite curious.

No grammar or spelling errors that I can find, so I send my kudos :) Good luck with this story in the future!

It was short and simple, with a lot left to think about, but it wasn't bad. I thought the matching names was a little too "matchy matchy" (go figure- that sounds stupid). Still, it's not anything I can't deal with.
I love your opening line. It's the kind of dry, sexual humor that really left a smirk on my face. It was a great attention getter. The banter in this chapter is also cute. That's obviously a typical conversation many girlfriends have with their boyfriends. Because of your summary, I'm really interested to see just what's up with this couple. I will subscribe- so write more!! :D

This was actually really good[:
It really set the scene well and described everything really good.
And the names go together so well, i'm definately interested to see what happens next, so... I really enjoyed it and I think your a incredible writer at fanfic AND original, Overall, I really love it:)

This was a very good first chapter, it set the scene very well. I love the names Sally and Sully, a good combination :)

I'm looking forward for what comes next!

Short first chapter but I'm interested to see where you're going to go with this :)
Sully and Sally. I like the sound of that

Part of the description that really grabbed my attention was when you said that when ever someone mentions them, they seem to appear...Interesting

I'm wondering what you're going to do with that little idea there now

Oh and I wonder what those two were up to then? ;) hehe