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  • the ghosty

    the ghosty (100)

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    hey amilcar,
    this is Amber, im glad you like my story and yea there was spelling mistakes and phrases that didnt really work but thanks to that i was able to fix them.

    Thanks Amber
    April 18th, 2011 at 08:02am
  • Amilcar

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    It's a great start.
    Seems like a very interesting storyline is about to develop.
    However, a few spelling mistakes and phrases didn't sound too right.
    Otherwise, good beginning. :)
    April 14th, 2011 at 10:06am
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