Melinda the Servent - Comments

hey amilcar,
this is Amber, im glad you like my story and yea there was spelling mistakes and phrases that didnt really work but thanks to that i was able to fix them.

Thanks Amber

It's a great start.
Seems like a very interesting storyline is about to develop.
However, a few spelling mistakes and phrases didn't sound too right.
Otherwise, good beginning. :)