i really liked this. made me think sweet thoughts and made me feel all calm and warm inside^^ ..haha that prob sounded strange but its true :P
June 18th, 2011 at 04:43am
I'll just quickly point out the errors I caught - I think there were only two.
It was a warm summer’s night with a mild almost non-existent.
I think you're missing a word at the end of this sentence?
I smiled watching this site.
The word in bold should be "sight." :)
Now, onto the real comment - I enjoyed reading this! I've never seen a real shooting star before. I thought I did once but it was just a satellite circling overhead (haha) so I can only imagine how exciting it must be to see a real one. I liked how this was short and sweet and got right to the point. I could tell it was a calm and beautiful night, too. You really conveyed everything very clearly :)
Great job!