Aw, fucking hell, Jonson needs to fuck up or something so Skye can come home and realize how much Tom means and idk, Jillian should help her realize it, it'd be awesome. I love this story, and i hate that Tom goes through so much pain. :c
You should be so proud of this story! It's absolutely amazing! Your attention to detail is fantastic; did you have to do a lot of research about this?
Your plot is so original--I love reading about new things! Never read a Tom Sykes fic about a blind person before! And I don't imagine it's a piece of cake to write, either (:
I really wanna see how Skye reacts when Tom stops hanging out with her. If he like, became a drunk or just sulked all day at Oli's house and she came looking for him.
I really wanna see how what she would do if she was in his shoes and like, she would ask him to hang out and he would say no, but some other girl would pop in and want to hang out and Tommy would say yes to her.
Honestly, I'm starting to despise Skye. I like her when it's just her and Tom, but whenever Jonsons involved, I loathe her.
I know she's blind but she has to see that he loves her! Or just noticed how he's different... UGH.
This story makes me so sad! Tom seriously loves her and she can't see that (literally and metaphorically). It's a lot harder for her to catch onto anything because she's blind and cant see the expressions and actions that Tom makes at the mention of Jonson. It's hard enough getting a friend to realize that you love them as more than just a friend and it's 2x as hard when they can't see your advances. Poor Tommy :( I love this story so much so please keep updating! <3