*Comment Swap* I really like the two themes mixed of doctor who and the terminator. However I feel that the story started off too soon. To really capture a readers attention, details that make them attached to the story is key. I think if you add in more details, along with the dialogue, this story could be very well written. There are a few grammar errors, but that is easily fixed! I do like the start of it though, it seems very interesting!
I really like the two themes mixed of doctor who and the terminator. However I feel that the story started off too soon. To really capture a readers attention, details that make them attached to the story is key. I think if you add in more details, along with the dialogue, this story could be very well written. There are a few grammar errors, but that is easily fixed! I do like the start of it though, it seems very interesting!