The Joke's on You - Comments

OMG! I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! This has made my week.
It was a great read and a lot of fun. I think I might have to read it again. XD
Great job on it!

I actually really love this and my heart broke for Spencer at first and then that cute little ending. I really loved it! :)

that mr. smith-urie vs. mr. urie-smith sentence made me die of laughter.

ah, this was so adorable, i loved it! you really brought out everyone's characters. i dunno, i'm sorry i didn't make a proper review for this one! it totally deserves it! i have no criticism though, just pure love!

As soon as I read that summary, I started laughing. This may be one of the few completely and utterly original ideas I've seen on here in a long time and I just know that everything is about to go wrong with this plan. xD

Holy hell, did Panic! split two years ago? It really doesn't feel that long, to be honest. But when I first read the summary, I thought that the joke was just going to be among their friends but to the whole world? I am so excited to see what's going to happen! Before I go any further, I love how you have the story broken into small paragraphs, as well. I'm not entirely sure why I love it, but I do .

I love how this seems completely and utterly realistic as well. When you mentioned the Ryden shippers, I burst out laughing. I couldn't help but imagine how this would actually go down; I'm also glad that you mentioned Ryan, even if it was just for a bit. I can only imagine how great his reaction would be. xD

Another thing I really love about your writing is your use of contrast. The brackets is obviously one way of showing this but you also just do it in your writing and it just seems even more realistic. I loved this sentence;
Spencer hates Jon. Jon is a horrible friend. At least Ryan never pretends not to be an asshole, god.. That seems exactly what someone would think and that's another reason why I enjoy your writing so much; it just seems so realistic, no matter what the situation is.

“My best friend is Ryan Ross. I could not have less of a problem with the gay thing.”

Honestly, I absolutely adored this. I think the ending was so goddamn cute and I really don't think there was a bad point about it. I'm particularly glad that you mentioned one spot where Ryan and Spencer weren't really talking for a bit; I think that just made things a little more realistic. I loved all your characters; Ryan, the smartass, Spencer the shy one and Brendon the mischievous one... they all just seemed so damn real. Basically, this was amazing. <3

Well, you may be having second thoughts about this, but I LOVED it! Like disasterologist. said, it was "ridiculously adorable." You had me laughing at almost every paragraph. I absolutely love how you wrote what Spencer was thinking and feeling. You really brought his character out. I will most definitely be reading more of your stories. Thumbs up! XP

That was ridiculously adorable. Made my morning :)