Lovely, fitting layout :) And the story banner is just too cute :P
Durden went into a frenzy, practically choking down the small piece of meat. His wet black nose pressed to the concrete, desperate for more that wasn’t there. I really liked this part in particular, because I can so clearly picture that haha. Love dogs.
I really liked this, overall. I thought the anticipation was well built up of the arrival of Logan, and how well Durden would take to him Glad he did :)
I like how you tied all the elements together in that last sentence :)
I can't pick on anything to do with your grammar/spelling. Very well written, easy to understand sentences.
And the story banner is just too cute :P
Durden went into a frenzy, practically choking down the small piece of meat. His wet black nose pressed to the concrete, desperate for more that wasn’t there.
I really liked this part in particular, because I can so clearly picture that haha. Love dogs.
I really liked this, overall. I thought the anticipation was well built up of the arrival of Logan, and how well Durden would take to him
Glad he did :)
I like how you tied all the elements together in that last sentence :)
I can't pick on anything to do with your grammar/spelling. Very well written, easy to understand sentences.