Brompton Cocktail - Comments

nope no killing today lol i like how simple it was and sweet it was a awww moment lol

Awww Dami is such a mature kid. Evan has done a great job.
Plus Zacky would make a perfect daddy. ;)
I loved this and I hole they have a great time in the game.
Love ya
Ps. I know what you mean. It's awful. =\

I share your frustration about lack of updates. I've hardly done any writing in what feels like weeks. =/ But this was well-worth the wait. I got a sense of happy family when Zacky kissed Evan on the cheek and told her they'd be back by dinnertime. XD It was cute! And I'm glad he's having a positive affect on Damien. That's definitely a good thing.

Anyway, I have to finish getting ready for work, so I'll head off. =)

xoxo
HJ.

I hope Zacky and Damian have a nice day :)

Moreeeeeee

I hope Zacky can talk to Damian.
More soon please!

I loooved it. I can already see that Evan is falling for Zacky buuuut she's worried Zacky leaving her just like Dami's father.
I hope that Zacky and Damis talk goes alright and that Damis goes back to normal.
Love ya

Really good :)

Well, that was unexpected. Did I mention that I thought Damien was being bullied? I never expected it to be the other way around, and in such a violent way, too! That's insane!

Let's hope that Zacky can lend a helping hand.

xoxo
HJ.

I love that you've allowed us to get to know Damien enough so that we can actually see there really is something going on here. Nice touch. It makes me worry for him, though. Maybe he's getting bullied at school!? D=

xoxo
HJ.

I'm sooooo glad the date went well buuuut now I'm a bit worried with what could be wrong with Dami I hope that it isn't something bad.
Love ya

I hope everythin' is ok with him!
Lovin' this story!!

aw. using kids to get to their moms. works like magic. hahaha.

Awesome awesome update!!
Can't wait till the date/lunch! :)

This chapter had me bouncing with glee, like a little kid. It was so cute, the way it all unfolded. Zacky's a sneaky guy, giving his number to Damien like that. I loved it! I can't wait to see what unfolds. XD

xoxo
HJ.

YaY. They have a date!!!!!!! Woooohoooooo. I'm sooooo stoked for that.

Ummmm I think you should do a chappy about Dami's thoughts about this. I know it's a somewhat stupid request buuut I think it would be greeeat if we went a little bit deeper with how Dami feels about this whole situation and stuff.
Love ya
Ps. That's just an idea you don't necessarily have to do it. buuuut it would be great if you did. =D

I wish I was making the sort of money those two are. It would make life just that little bit easier, especially right now. I liked this little bit of interaction between them, though. It showed that she's maybe just starting to be a little more comfortable around him. At least she knows he's a respectable businessman. ;)

Wonderful update, as always!

xoxo
HJ.

love this please update soon

I find it kinda funny that she doesn't want anything to do with Zacky buuuut yet she wants to know stuff about him.
Love ya

Oh my stallion ducky I loved this they should meet up again sooner or something