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  • jazter

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    well done! This was a nice and fully fleshed one-shot!
    March 5th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • chelseadaggerr

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    loved itttt
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    very beautifully written!
    thank you for sharing it with me!
    i can tell you are a talented writer! i might have to go check out some of your other stuff ;)
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    OH MY GOODNESS.
    I think you write the best Jordan Staal
    stories. :D

    I loveeeed this.
    <3
    June 13th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • Boomerang;

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    This blew my mind. And I may or may not have started to cry. It was just so beautiful, and I love that song. I am so in love with your writing, it's insane. I am jealous.
    May 24th, 2011 at 11:36pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    can you make this into a story.
    i'm sorry but this would be a CHOICE story. let me tell you.
    i mean you don't have to put it up haha you can like just write it out for a while til you finish your other ones
    but on a serious note, this was fantastic. i would just love more. you know? like a prequel, this one shot being the middle and then like what happens after, you know?
    April 20th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • millertime

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    That was a great oneshot! I really liked how you worked the song in - it definitely fit the situation. I really like how you managed to paint a full picture of their relationship in so few words. And I love the hint of them beginning again in the end.
    April 16th, 2011 at 03:21pm
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