Request For Silence - Comments

jazter (100)

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well done! This was a nice and fully fleshed one-shot!

March 5th, 2013 at 05:37am

chelseadaggerr (100)

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loved itttt

August 7th, 2011 at 05:10pm

Ultraviolet Light (100)

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very beautifully written!
thank you for sharing it with me!
i can tell you are a talented writer! i might have to go check out some of your other stuff ;)

June 17th, 2011 at 11:25pm

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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OH MY GOODNESS.
I think you write the best Jordan Staal
stories. :D

I loveeeed this.
<3

June 13th, 2011 at 12:23am

Boomerang; (100)

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This blew my mind. And I may or may not have started to cry. It was just so beautiful, and I love that song. I am so in love with your writing, it's insane. I am jealous.

May 24th, 2011 at 11:36pm

Carry On Winchester (100)

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can you make this into a story.
i'm sorry but this would be a CHOICE story. let me tell you.
i mean you don't have to put it up haha you can like just write it out for a while til you finish your other ones
but on a serious note, this was fantastic. i would just love more. you know? like a prequel, this one shot being the middle and then like what happens after, you know?

April 20th, 2011 at 05:46am

millertime (100)

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That was a great oneshot! I really liked how you worked the song in - it definitely fit the situation. I really like how you managed to paint a full picture of their relationship in so few words. And I love the hint of them beginning again in the end.

April 16th, 2011 at 03:21pm