The Great Rising - Comments

Thanks i really apreciate it :D

I ABSOLUTLY love this story lmao miranda is too much so awesome i'd love to met her in real life.lol.

I ABSOLUTLY love this story lmao miranda is too much so awesome i'd love to met her in real life.lol.

thanks for the advice im new at writing stories i really appreciate it :)

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I've never personally listened to of Black Veil Brides and I have no idea what the rest of it is, but it seems that you could put it together. A little advice though, space it out a little more. Put a space between each different dialogue sentence. It just makes it easier to read, because if someone wants to read it and open it up to see it jumbled like that it kind of makes you not wanna read it. But, great work! :) And I hope you continue on :)