Certainly interesting! I'd go as far as to call it gripping... Very nice descriptive work especially! The chunks are good, they are of readable size. HOWEVER! The mutilated body creeped me out a little. Thank fuck Frank wasn't naked or I would've...done something dramatic. (Like crying, but I wouldn't have cried.)
I'd go as far as to call it gripping...
Very nice descriptive work especially!
The chunks are good, they are of readable size.
HOWEVER!
The mutilated body creeped me out a little. Thank fuck Frank wasn't naked or I would've...done something dramatic. (Like crying, but I wouldn't have cried.)