Loved the update! :) Hm... so, the warden's trying to get Beth to get him more stuff, huh? I wonder if she'll fall for it... I mean, at some point she may want to see Nick with the kids and he probably won't let her because he wants to make a deal. :/ Huh. Great update, though, hon. :) Can't wait for more! :D
Hm... so I see it got, a little hot and steamy. XD lol. I feel awkward. So I'll just stop there. :P Great job with the update! Hm... the warden guy was right, though. Nick should treat Beth a little better. I mean, she does everything to meet his needs, and he does the same in return, but... not as much. :( Hopefully he can improve himself. But there's already so much wrong with him mentally, so... idk if he'll be able to. Can't wait for more! :)
Loved the update! :D Hm... I didn't really like the way Nick treated Beth in this chapter. Poor girl. She just... suffices to his needs. And they were interrupted. What a shame. :/ But by that you can figure out that he lied to Beth when he said he didn't do anything to get the more private room. I wonder what he'll do? Will he take the deal? I guess it comes down to, which does he love more? Beth or drugs? It'll be sad if he chooses the second one. Great update! You still have me here as a reader, doll. Sorry it's been... forever since I last talked to you. I apologize. My email chat thing is just so slow and slows down my computer... that's why I'm hardly ever online. :/ But feel free to talk to me on here through comments or messages. I get on here daily, so, yeah. Or even on Twitter or Tumblr. My email is just a pain anymore. :/ I hope you can update again soon. I understand about the feedback. It sucks when you don't receive anything. :/ Can't wait for more, though. I'll be here until the end. :D
Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! Hm... so Nick has something set up for them, huh? But Beth doesn't want to go along with it. :/ It's too bad that she has to. :( Great update, though. You let us know of the plan next, and possibly what drama may ensue from it. :o Can't wait for more! :D
Loved the second update! Sorry for the delay in commenting. :/ You did a great job with the update! Aw, I thought their visit was sweet... but a bit sad as well, with Jenifer and Jacob being upset and all. :( Is it wrong to say that I hope Nick gets out of jail? lol. Maybe I want that to happen because he's being sweet right now; idk. Anyway, great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
Aw, yay, you posted the first chapter! Hm... I like the banner... Nick kind of looks like I would picture him to look in this story. Idk... it's something about the picture you used in it... Anyways, overall, great first update! :D Hm... aw, poor Beth. :( I can't tell... does she really love him or is she just playing along because he wants her to? Hm... And I wonder how the visit will go...? :o Only you know, but can't wait to find out. I can't wait to see what all you have in store for this sequel! :D Definitely... subscribed! :D