That brightened my mood a bit. It was so cute. I loved the palm reading idea. It was very unique. And, of course, I love my Panic boys, too. Very fun people. Very fun to read about if I do say so myself. I also liked how you sort of lifted the mood at the end. It was kind of tense between them at the begining (with good reason), but I thought it was cute when they joked around a little near the end. Definatly brightened the story and let it finish on a lighter note. I also love the last paragraph. Very cute. Nice job. Very well done.
June 3rd, 2011 at 07:34am