Finding Answers in Wrinkles - Comments

  • That brightened my mood a bit. It was so cute. I loved the palm reading idea. It was very unique. And, of course, I love my Panic boys, too. Very fun people. Very fun to read about if I do say so myself. I also liked how you sort of lifted the mood at the end. It was kind of tense between them at the begining (with good reason), but I thought it was cute when they joked around a little near the end. Definatly brightened the story and let it finish on a lighter note. I also love the last paragraph. Very cute. Nice job. Very well done.
    June 3rd, 2011 at 07:34am
  • I love that the last word was "oblige" because that word doesn't get nearly enough recognition or use.
    Anyways, I'm glad I'm reading this now, because this is lightening my mood right now. I'm in a shit mood right now, but this lifted that a lot because of how adorable it is.
    I love the palm reading idea, and it worked so well with the picture.
    To be honest, I really wasn't sure what could come of that picture when I posted it on the contest. I just knew it was adorable, so I needed to use it.
    But this story was a wonderful representation of it and I just loved it.
    It's a Panic fic, right? Because if so, I kind of loved that you did that. Usually people don't like doing fan-fictions when they have a picture that doesn't look like the people, but I liked how this contrasted like that.
    The only spelling thing I noticed was that you spelled "realized" with an 's', but at least I knew what you meant. And I really didn't find any grammatical issues, or if I did, I can't remember them, so I probably just skimmed through them.
    Overall, wonderfully amazing job, deary. I loved it all.
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:10pm
  • Oh my God, this is so incredibly cute. It had me giggling pretty much the whole way through, because I couldn't get this pervy image of Spencer's face throughout his palm-reading session out of my head.

    You did a really good job. :]
    May 24th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • This was so sweet! I loved the descriptions about Spencer controlling his emotions but getting hurt easily. It's a nice contrast=] And using the palm reading really helped you characterize him really well. Oh and yeah so you totally blew my mind when I realized who everyone was (...almost at the end ofthe story). I actually had to pause for a moment to control my fangirling
    May 15th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • This was really very sweet and I must say I liked it a lot.
    I found it through the story pimping thread - that, and my absolutely awesome detective skills ('cause the story pimping thread describes this, but leads to your Frikey-story ^^; )
    Anyway, this is love. And I like your writing style, by the way! XP
    April 18th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • Aww that was so cute :)
    April 18th, 2011 at 08:35pm