The Hunting Snowman - Comments

  • lalala247

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    Holy crap.
    scary. I never thought about a snowman before that way.
    I'm not a big fan of humor but I have to say this was really good! :)
    April 19th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • Painter's Dream

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    I gotta say I love this :) Besides the surprise ending, the description was brilliant. I could see the snowman there, grabbing the little boy's arm. But I guess I sort of saw it coming since in my head I was screaming,"DON'T GO ANY CLOSER TO IT!" But overall, great imagery, a brillant surprise, you're an amazing writer :)
    April 18th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Wow killer snowman!
    I did not see that one coming. When the boy was going towards the snowman i was just waiting for him to destroy it and i was dreading that because seriously, what's the snowman ever done to him?
    But i'm not sure if the snowman is as innocent as i first thought now though lol
    ITZ A KILLER!!!
    First story i've read about a snowman EVER hehe
    And i think that in a way i still do feel a bit sorry for the killer snowbeast hehe He just wanted someone to be there with him :)
    April 18th, 2011 at 06:33pm
  • youth and whiskey.

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    Wow! I'll never go around a snowman again. This was absolutely creepy! And I loved it. This is the sort of stuff I love reading. To be honest, I was skeptical about this at first, due to the title. Snowmen aren't the most menacing creatures so I thought this was going to be some sort of corny love story. But boy, was I wrong. This was just brilliant. The only thing I would suggest is to watch your punctuation. I noticed a few run on sentences and what-not. But otherwise, this is perfect. The last paragraph gave me chills! Excellent job, darling.
    April 18th, 2011 at 06:30pm
  • TariRawr

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    O_O wow, scary much :L I really liked this, you got the atmosphere perfect .
    April 18th, 2011 at 06:27pm