Off to a good start
April 18th, 2011 at 09:26pm
The Little Wooden Music Box - Comments
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Story is really nice..... you can make it more beautiful.....please give more attention the description part....April 18th, 2011 at 08:05pm
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This is really nice and I liked the way you captured her emotions, but sometimes you went a little overboard on the descriptions, imageries, and metaphors.April 18th, 2011 at 07:50pm
