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  • waves wash

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    Off to a good start
    April 18th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • Diya

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    Story is really nice..... you can make it more beautiful.....please give more attention the description part....
    April 18th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • MixMatch

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    This is really nice and I liked the way you captured her emotions, but sometimes you went a little overboard on the descriptions, imageries, and metaphors.
    April 18th, 2011 at 07:50pm
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