I cannot believe that Jamie said that to a little child What a fu**er Threatening a child like that....not cool Jamie got what he deserved and he deserves still way more than that And Riley and Zacky really have to watch out I wouldn't put it past Jamie to really do something I can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Aw, the all seem to generally like Riley And that's what matters I can't believe that Gena really came back I can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. One thing I noticed is that you always use the word 'coarse' instead of 'course', I don't know if it's purpose or not. And another thing, you used 'your' instead of 'you're', so you should check your chapter once more. And the thing with the 'coarse' if it wasn't purpose, then you should check all your chapter once again.
Aw, now Riley can finally feel more at home now that they re-decorated the living room And I doubt she'll have any problems with the other guys They already met her briefly at the video shoot Wonder what's going to happen at the barbecue I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
I have to say I'm really diggin this story, love it because of course its zacky come on now what's not to love!! Hmm chapter was amazing, update soon!!
Psh, Jamie was seriously going to use the whole I can explain thing Cheating is cheating, there isn't any explaining needed Actions speak louder than words At least Zacky and Riley don't have to go through this alone They can lean on each other for this I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. I forgot to mention in my previous comment that I found one mistake. He chuckled and I rolled my eyes softly as I stumbled. The beer was starting to take it’s toll on me and I was getting waisted, fast. -> i guess you meant wasted, it was in the chapter where Brianna and Riley went to out
Aw, Zacky really developed feelings And he now told Riley those I still think that Jamie is/was cheating on Riley with Gena I mean, if Brianna saw him with a blonde chick Haha, that he could really persuade Riley onto helping with the video Really curious to see how Riley will respond Can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Now this is an amazing story!! I absolutely love it!! Anything zacky and I'm hooked..haha. Instead of updating my own story I'm too busy looking for new ones to read!! Update soon!!
Oha, so she cheated on Zacky And I kind of have the feeling that what's-his-face (Riley' fiance, I kinda forgot his name) was the one she cheated with Maybe it's a wrong guessing, but that what I'm guessing And she's coming with the whole 'let me explain' sh*t I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Ps. I sometimes noticed you capitalized words where they don't belong capitalized, just thought I'd tell you :)