The Undertaking - Comments

Plz keep writing the story the its to good to end!!!!!!
Keep writing for all ur readers!!!!!!!

I love this story :] gah!!! I can relate to a lot of things, not the assassin thing, but being in love with someone you can't be with...atleast right then, and the not regretting the sex just the aftermath. Haha. I love this! :] Please finsh!

Update update! Pleeeaaasssseeee

Please finish it, I love your story! <3

D: don't stop writing it! But, if you do you should tell me how it ends. Lol. And thanks for the pic comment. Adalie was about a month old then. She's 7months now and a lot cuter. Lol that's wrong of me to say but I had a bad pregnancy and she didn't have enough fluid around her and I was in labor for 9 days so she came out looking a little silly.

O, now i see why you don't want to continue the story.
A lack of comments, but don't worry.
I know there are a lot of people who read you story, but won't leave a comment behind, like i do most of the times.
But i read your story, and i like it.
Don't be to picky, it's good.
Just don't rush things too much.
But keep going:)

So, I have a solution for the draining her dry thing but idk if your vampires can be made or if they're just born.... God I'm excited for the end! But I think this one should have a sequel. Along with your other one but I think it should be about cyan. Hehe! I have ideas. :)

This is awesome! I love the idea. Please finish it and keep up the good work! :D

I just read all four chapters. This is my favorite story by far. Please keep up the good work.