Oh Lord, I loved this. I loved it so much. Please, for the love of all that is good in this world, CONTINUE THIS STORY. I would love the opportunity to write Ash's POV, if you really want someone to. Guh. Awesome story.
You should definitely continue this. And if you haven't got an Ashley POV yet, I'd be interested if you tell me more about what you want his character to be like and whatnot. :)