July 19th, 2011 at 01:28am
This is lovely :)
I thought the best part was this:
You told me your favorite song when we stood there, two silent observers among the swaying bodies. The way your voice went quiet, the way your eyes burned…
It was more special to me, than dancing with you could have ever been.
It was really nice how you made her sound like she was looking back on the memories, and just choosing to love him, even if he doesn't know it. I like how you added music into it, by putting it in the memory.
=) So I shall go read now...
A simplistic story of the emotion of love and love lost.
A very bittersweet feel came over me as I read it, which gave it a calming and warming sense that was there in the characters storm of hurt and anguish.
Good work.