nonono! it wasn't bad at all! i mean, it was sad, but your writing/the chapter wasn't bad :) but oh gosh..more drama, haha. i hope you update again soon! and i really like your other new story, btw!
This is lovely. I like it a lot. One thing though, in a few of your earlier chapters you refer to pairs like "I and Spencer." You should "Spencer and I" or "Me and Spencer." Other than that, it's great!