I can't decide what's better, Toby calling him a "sexy giraffe" or the idea of Jordan storming into a party and carrying a girl out over his shoulder. LOVE!
This was perfect. The drunken party kids. Jordan to the rescue. Toby's snippy comments. Everything. I'd been flipping out for the past 8 days thinking Toby was in trouble when, really, she was just, uh...drunkenly horny. God, it was funny! Keep it up!! I reaaaallly can't wait for the next update!!!
I love this story soooo much! I knew it though, I knew she was only invited to the party because that bitch wanted Jordan there. But I'm also worried about her phone. If they texted at all about their whole relationship being a set up and she doesn't have a lock on her phone, oh boy! Drama will ensue. Can't wait for the next chapter though. :)
I was sharing my disgust with a friend who doesn't read this so I summed it up for her. Thought I'd share it with ya (forgive me in some details are wrong lol)
Toby's an awk turtle. Ends up dating J. Staal. Olivia goes to college with her, sees her pic in the paper with Staal, befriends her, invites her to a house party. Toby goes, gets hammered. Skank uses Toby's phone to get J over by saying Toby's in trouble. Proceeds to try to bed J. J shoots her down, takes Toby, then tries to get Toby's phone back. Banter between J and skank. No phone.
I think me calling Olivia a skank tells you how I feel about this most recent chapter =)
I love super Jordan. I love him so much. And thank you for making drunk Toby like any other drunk person, it's actually how drunk people act without any of that bullshit people makeup. I love this chapter, I'm in aw at where you left it haha! Can't wait for more :)