Love this :) i feel so bad for jordan. making one mistake and it seems as if his whole world is falling apart. God, i know how that feels. And that man jumping to conclutions about him giving toby money sure put Jordan in a tough situation to handle. anyways; again, i love this story so far, and i Cant wait for the next chapter!
I am enjoying this story so far!! I feel Jordan's punishment was a bit harsh but I guess he really screwed up! Anyway, I should have known that he would get caught by someone handing her money... jeez I hate when people make assumptions before they know the hole story! Anyway I can't wait for more! Amanda
I saw you had this story listed under the comment you left on my story, so - naturally - I had to check it out. I love it! Love. It. Can't wait for more!
Not gonna lie, I almost choked on my tea when I saw that you named the cook Louise, which coincidentally is also my name. I really liked the chapter though :) Gimme more!