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  • VeiledInsanity

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    Epic new layout!
    May 6th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • Charlie Brown.

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    I really liked this. It gave you such a great inside to the character's thoughts and how you write it's so observant and descriptive. Very well done! :D
    May 1st, 2011 at 12:44am
  • rust cohle

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    This is a really, really good start. I love the idea, and the way you write is simply captivating. You can really hear her voice strongly, and you have a very mature tone to your words.

    Just a little point. It might seem pretty pointless (and it's got nothing to do with your writing), but I think if you made a layout - or asked someone to do one for you (I'd do it, if you wanted) - it would really bring the story to life.

    Really good story. I'm subscribing. :)
    April 23rd, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • Aisdais

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    :D
    April 21st, 2011 at 04:53pm
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