Don't Look Back - Comments

could you make more chapters to this? plz^^ *begs* i liked it alot! c:

this is nice...interesting.

The green of this layout is really, really calming. It's all mellow and makes me think of apples on grass for some reason. Anyways, I'm really eager - as a beaver!(: - to read this newest piece of perfection from youuu. <33 :D

I finally decide to move. I'm alone in this corridor. People carelessly crash into me without even a solid murmur of an apology.

This line tripped me up a little bit. If she's alone in the hallway, why are people hitting her? I get the sense that she means without friends, alone, but it still got a little sticky there.

This broke my heart, really, Emmy. It just makes me want to cry. ): <33 But as always, your emotion, your detail - everything was so real and beautiful and I adored it. <33