Balls of Steel - Comments

I really liked this. Especially the beginning. I graduated this past summer and the whole senior class becoming one with each other thing is so completely true! Anyway, excuse me babbling, I really liked this because of the way their relationship is. I enjoy stories with dysfunctional friendships, no idea why haha. It was very well written. :)

I liked this a lot! It says a lot about friendship in general and how you can get caught in some negative ones. I liked how it had a lot of reality in it and how the main character brought in the prospect of college too. I think you characters were well developed and I could really imagine them at this party like real people. I’m going to have to read more of your writing (: I also liked the simple layout; it’s not plain and it’s perfect for a one-shot and contest. Good luck in the contest by the way!

Very good. :-)

I'm judging for the lyrics contest. You had the contest link in the summary, a self-made layout and a fairly lengthy piece, so no rules were broken and you clearly put some thought into this; especially explaining the song and I was impressed with how you interpreted the quote.

Check back on the contest page to see if you've won soon. :-)

Interesting relationship.
I think a more drastic event could have happened besides a failed "hook up," but you chose not to, but I think it's for a better purpose. It's the little things that count. That and I believe an author does things for a purpose consciously or not. Lastly, a good job to you. :)

Good luck with the contests.

I like this alot. :) No mistakes. The picture you chose really fit in with the story well and I applaud you for that. :)