Mentally Undressing - Comments

Ah, I adored this. I absolutely loved the line you started out with – it caught my attention and it was so beautifully put together. The detail was so vivid and perfect and beautiful. I have a feeling I’m going to be saying the word beautiful a lot during this comment, simply because the entire oneshot was just so beautiful. One thing that I should mention is that you should press the enter button once more after every paragraph, just to space it out and make it look neater. ;) Again, the details were simply amazing, and I loved the overall theme of it. Excellent job, dear! Keep up the good work!

<3 Haven

I really liked it, it was different- thats why i loved it. Please continue writing other stuff!
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Jen
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