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Awesome! :D didn't seem like you had writers block, I though it was great :3

Ahh! Love it! Update soooon!

lol at berts fail :'D
this story is cool.
keep writin
keep runnin
xx

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmaaaaazzzziiiiiiiiinnnngggg!

i also want to see that film loving this story need update

Whats the name of the film?!?

Im loving it!

O.O what is with the "Monster..help me, please help me"? I am a bit confused, is it Gerard jerking Frank around, or is it the other stalker?
What does Frank mean it was like when he was younger?
Who the hell is the other stalker?
Why would Jersey like Gerard? >.> I would think if he is going to put Frank's life in peril then he would try to bite his nuts off..just saying.
Anyhow, you have really captured my interest and curiousity, would you mind updating soon please because I am entirely selfish and I want way more! =D

Ooooooo . Kill Frankie ? maybe , maybe not. Gee turns Frankie into vampire like him? probably. Spelling and grammar need polishing but other than that very nice. I like it update soon.

Love the story. The grammer and punctuation is a bit iffy but you're doin' good even though english isn't your main language. :D

love this story!
ohh Gerard why...
nooo! not Frankie

Oooo.
Suspense. :D

I just read this and I loved it

I love it!! Update soon. I love a good Ferard and hot boy sex. Just some info about me. (: hope I didn't scare you. (;

It had a strange, brooding quality. All along the shores grew clumps of Mall reeds that reached out like greedy fingers, as if it was waiting for someone.
That piece of description is beautiful <3 For real.
It's sad to hear you have writers block, I hope it clears up soon okay?
More soon,
I love this<3
xxxx

This is very good. You have a wonderful writing style. But the plotline is very confusing,
I don't know much about your characters and the plotline is confusing me a little. But other than that, very good.

don't kill frankiiieee

Why does Gerard have to kill Frankie? Why not Bert? I hate Bert.

But he can't... He... Can't kill Frankie

i hope he doesn't carry through