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  • HarlequinGirl.

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    Awesome! :D didn't seem like you had writers block, I though it was great :3
    October 26th, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • X MCRMY X

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    Ahh! Love it! Update soooon!
    August 3rd, 2011 at 10:56am
  • Rebby_Iero

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    lol at berts fail :'D
    this story is cool.
    keep writin
    keep runnin
    xx
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmaaaaazzzziiiiiiiiinnnngggg!
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • frerardlover1

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    i also want to see that film loving this story need update
    June 12th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • scaredfingertips

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    Whats the name of the film?!?
    June 10th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • scaredfingertips

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    Im loving it!
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:43am
  • Dumb_dumb

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    O.O what is with the "Monster..help me, please help me"? I am a bit confused, is it Gerard jerking Frank around, or is it the other stalker?
    What does Frank mean it was like when he was younger?
    Who the hell is the other stalker?
    Why would Jersey like Gerard? >.> I would think if he is going to put Frank's life in peril then he would try to bite his nuts off..just saying.
    Anyhow, you have really captured my interest and curiousity, would you mind updating soon please because I am entirely selfish and I want way more! =D
    June 4th, 2011 at 08:19pm
  • petrifiderose7

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    Ooooooo . Kill Frankie ? maybe , maybe not. Gee turns Frankie into vampire like him? probably. Spelling and grammar need polishing but other than that very nice. I like it update soon.
    May 22nd, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • FearTheWombat

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    Love the story. The grammer and punctuation is a bit iffy but you're doin' good even though english isn't your main language. :D
    May 22nd, 2011 at 12:56pm
  • celeste

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    love this story!
    ohh Gerard why...
    nooo! not Frankie
    May 19th, 2011 at 07:23am
  • BehindTheScenes;

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    Oooo.
    Suspense. :D
    May 13th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • angy_something

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    I just read this and I loved it
    May 10th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • K_Shadows

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    I love it!! Update soon. I love a good Ferard and hot boy sex. Just some info about me. (: hope I didn't scare you. (;
    May 10th, 2011 at 02:14am
  • DryIce.

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    It had a strange, brooding quality. All along the shores grew clumps of Mall reeds that reached out like greedy fingers, as if it was waiting for someone.
    That piece of description is beautiful <3 For real.
    It's sad to hear you have writers block, I hope it clears up soon okay?
    More soon,
    I love this<3
    xxxx
    May 10th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • goodthings

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    This is very good. You have a wonderful writing style. But the plotline is very confusing,
    I don't know much about your characters and the plotline is confusing me a little. But other than that, very good.
    May 9th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • MCRisMyHero

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    don't kill frankiiieee
    May 8th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • Draven;

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    Why does Gerard have to kill Frankie? Why not Bert? I hate Bert.
    May 8th, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    But he can't... He... Can't kill Frankie
    May 8th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    i hope he doesn't carry through
    May 8th, 2011 at 03:18am
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