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  • insanetrain

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    Aaaaaaaaah! Can't wait till the next chapter D: I hope Hazelyn has an "Ohmygosh I'm such an idiot" moment when Ryan finally tells her what happened all that time ago. Really awesome so far<3
    September 27th, 2012 at 04:32am
  • fearless-forever

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    I keep hearing her saying she's still his bestfriend. But my mind is like this: WHAT HAPPENED TO BEING COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY IN LOVE WITH HIM? GOSH YOU UNGRATEFUL LITTLE.... It gets worse from there. But anyway, I still love the story and am waiting for that magic moment when it all works out.
    September 25th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • ImJustLaya

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    I just need to say two things:

    1. I'm finally Satisfied. Ryan finally let go, and gave Hazelyn the chance to see what she was actually missing.

    2. When this story is over, my life will be over as well.
    September 24th, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • blaqrican13

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    Cant wait for more
    September 24th, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • MusicLover525

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    Finally! She got the message that nothing is granted! I'm so glad that everything is slowly finding its way! But they are just bestfriends at the moment. Hopefully now Ryan will get to tell his side of the story and maybe even introduce those two? The kid and Hazelyn? I also think that Abigail should have a word with Hazelyn. ^^ Hazelyn is, after all, a forgiving person! Look at Gabriel! :) I'm sad that it's ending but if they going to find their happy end now, then I am all for it! ^^
    September 24th, 2012 at 03:31pm
  • justrealizelife

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    So it's probably a mix between how tired I am and the chapter, but I actually teared up some during that. I can't wait for more and though it will be sad that the story is over, it means you'll be able to start another amazing story (series?) and with that thought in mind, I can't wait :)
    September 24th, 2012 at 09:16am
  • MusicLover525

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    NOOO!! WHAT THE HECK?! AHHH!! D: they were so close! And when the hell did Ryan EVER lie to her?! She was the one who took it wrong in the first place and what is it with her always running away?! :(
    And there I thought that they would finally tell each other the whole truth after she answered her mothers question... :(( I can't believe that Leslie was in on it, too though! O_O
    September 23rd, 2012 at 09:54am
  • fearless-forever

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    Poor Ryan... Haze has some serious problems.
    September 23rd, 2012 at 03:49am
  • Eliza Bennet

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    Cute!! Update!!
    September 22nd, 2012 at 12:56pm
  • MusicLover525

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    Aww ! She is starting to get to her old self with.. "improvements"? :D and he called her "Haze" again! :p
    September 22nd, 2012 at 10:44am
  • MusicLover525

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    More like upper cute! Just start dating for real already! If Ryan does not know that she still had feeling for him before he better know now! I mean, c'mon! That kiss? Her being touchy AND her cuddling?! :DD it doesn't take a master to know! :P
    September 21st, 2012 at 03:58pm
  • MusicLover525

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    NO WAY!! Ahahaha! Just make out already! :D
    September 20th, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • justrealizelife

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    Haze doesn't like him cause she LOVES him. duh!

    And just out of curiosity..has everyone stopped calling him Jr.? I feel like that suddenly changed in the second book or something..
    September 20th, 2012 at 09:13am
  • NeverLettingGo

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    UGH!! Ya know what's pissing me off... Hazelyn.. She is being a major bitch and its getting annoying, I absolutely LOVE the story!! I just would like to see her not being so bipolar all the time!! She needs to give up the bitch act and actually TALK! They both need to stop avoiding all these issues and fast. The bipolar crazy bitch is getting old now.
    September 20th, 2012 at 09:08am
  • MusicLover525

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    YES! Finally they are taking action! >:D there better be a thunderstorm.. Or they recreate a thunderstorm! :P and I love the deadline that was set! ^^ the truth is finally coming out! But does that mean theat we are nearing the end?? :((
    September 19th, 2012 at 03:22pm
  • justrealizelife

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    Told ya that was going to happen.
    And this is a chapter late cause I forgot to (somehow) do it last time..
    OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 19th, 2012 at 02:53am
  • fearless-forever

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    O.O Snap...
    September 19th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • MusicLover525

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    Dun dun dun! Didn't Hazelyn hang out with Gabriel?? Uh-oh! O_O drama? At least he will tell them all the real truth now.. Right? :s
    September 18th, 2012 at 09:12pm
  • CatSizzle

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    LOVE ITTTTTT! UPDATEEEEEE
    September 18th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • justrealizelife

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    I still don't like Gabriel..something seems off about him.
    September 17th, 2012 at 09:36pm