oh oh oh and the title and picture and layout are all perfect, they fit so well with the tone of the story and definitely the format reminds me of Kennedy somehow, even though I don't talk to him very in depth or anything--but I think you were spot on. okay, that's it I think. <3
Now I feel like I've gone and watched Kennedy change clothes or something because I read this, but is was so cute and adorable and lovely and you are a brilliant writer, Hannah. <3
okay first of all. i'm kind of swooning at how lovely the layout and title is, how it's mashed together and lower case and something about it looks very intriguing and the picture fits really well. and it was so strange seeing my name in a story where it was purposely intended to be about me, and i was squirming at the beginning (in a good way, though obviously) and their entire first conversation is so unbelievably realistic it's like you somehow were listening in on the first time i had a proper kiss because i'm so impassive like that most of the time "Oh?" and "Right." WHAT THE FUCK hannah how is this so perfect, and exactly me. how i'm mumbling uneasily, and clearing my throat. i love you so much for writing this because this made my day without a doubt and the plot line was so interesting because i had no idea at all what this was going to be about or where it was going to go, and ugh ugh ugh. <3