December 28th, 2011 at 02:13pm
I am Human and I Need to be Loved Just Like Every One Else Does - Comments
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I still misses this .__.December 27th, 2011 at 05:05am
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* Makes a cryface* Why is this story discontinued???!!!!!!November 9th, 2011 at 03:44am
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please update soon , I love this story and monte 2 hehehe.
anyway please update soon :)September 10th, 2011 at 01:09am -
Wait what? This is on hold? Awhhhhhhhh ;'[June 13th, 2011 at 08:14pm
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More please. I love this story alotMay 25th, 2011 at 05:06am
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:D Wonder what happens next? lol update soonMay 7th, 2011 at 02:57am
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Good lord, why didn't you ever start a story before this?! You're such a wonderful writer dude! 8D
I seriously love this story, I just caught myself up and whoooooaaaa. o_o you're just awesome. I love your detail and description, and all the little moments that you feel like you're in alauras head. That's a style element I find really interesting 8D I think Bryan and alaura have great chemistry and I love how you added in how 'even as a drunk, he was too nice for his own good'. Excellent dialogue and just AHH I love this! Oh and the almost sex dream? ;)) two words: ooh babeh.
UPDATE! 8D
Miss Mental =]]May 6th, 2011 at 03:39pm -
I love this! Update pleasee!May 6th, 2011 at 03:49am
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:D This story is really awesome.
I love how Monte calls her a 'kid' way too often :3April 29th, 2011 at 12:47am -
ohmygosh! i totally love this! see?! i told you you could do it! 8DDDDD
i love the plot; the age difference is definitely interesting and adds something for sure. i cant wait to see what happens from here. i think alaura is a really awesome character, and her dads a meanieface -.- her sisters are total jerks too! whats up with that, ditching your sister like that? nuh uh -.- buuuut she gets to meet mr money, or should i say thesexyhandsome blonde boy? xD and max, you sex addicted retard -.- forreal? -.-
i absolutely love this! the ONLY thing i would recommend is some grammar stuffs, but hey, we all do that. trust me. -.- xD the story is amazing, UPDATE!!!! PLEASE?
Molly Mental =]]April 27th, 2011 at 05:22am -
i like the story so far, i love monte also!
so please update soon, its off to a good start =]April 25th, 2011 at 07:52am
Honey, if you don't un-discontinue this, the lives you are affecting will soon be haunting you in your dreams.
D:
Seriously, though, you had better update... Because there are truly not enough het Bryan Money stories around. :'( I mean, slash is great - to a point.. Update!