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  • missann10

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    Love the end and it was very adorable! I think you should make a sequel :)
    August 29th, 2011 at 11:39pm
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    Love this. And I would totally be interested in a Patrick spin off
    August 29th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww i'm sad it ended!!!
    but it was cute non the less!
    August 29th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    No!!!! This can't be the end! You have to make a sequel! I'd be so heart broken if you didn't. I want to see how their relationship turns out. Keep up the truly stupendous work!!!
    August 29th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • sportychick40

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    Very very interested too see ehat happens
    August 29th, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    She needs to say yes and he needs to ask her out already.
    August 22nd, 2011 at 02:38am
  • JillNotJillian

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    Oh I hope he finally asks her out for real and she says yes!!!
    August 21st, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    awww so glad Tazer doesn't like her that way!
    Kaner and her little sister... i wonder how that will turn out!
    can't wait to see her answer to Brent's date!!!
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • missann10

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    I like it alot!! I hope she says yes to it, yay she is starting to like him :)
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    Oh that was so sweet how he asked her out! I really hope she says yes. But I don't get the 'take cake' part. Is it a typo or just some joke I'm not getting. Anyway I can't wait for the next one and keep up the incredible work!!!
    August 19th, 2011 at 02:00pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhh he asked her out on a real date!
    i hope she says yes!
    loved the update!
    August 19th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • missann10

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    Love it!!! Such a good story :)
    August 19th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • Jayla1231

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    So cute, love the take care of my lil girl and the last line of the chapter is awesome
    August 19th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this so much. I love how Kaner just makes himself at home in other peoples houses. LOL
    August 18th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    Awe that's so cute that he put his arm around her! I was so happy when he punched Avery though!!! God I hate him and the Rangers. Anyway awesome job and keep up the fabulous work!!!
    August 14th, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • missann10

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    and hot* if they both do like her. hope jon just thinks of her as a friend.
    August 14th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • missann10

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    Uhoh does Jon like her? hmm this shall get interesting or not :) Update soon!
    August 14th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    ahhhh Jonathan better not like her like her!
    she has to be with Brent!
    August 13th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    I am in love with this story.
    August 13th, 2011 at 07:05pm
  • JillNotJillian

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    I LOVE this story!!! It's so original and I love all the characters. I hope that Georgia and Brent will someday actually become boyfriend and girlfriend. Oh and a part of the story in Jon's view would be a cool idea to see how he really feels about her. Keep up the fantastic work!!!
    August 11th, 2011 at 12:16pm
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