I absolutely adore this story! Its just amazing. I was craving a Zacky story like this before you even posted it and then BAM! it was there. So I was overjoyed :) keep writing <3
Awww, Dasha, this was an absolutely phenomenal ending to the story. I'm so glad that this story was written and I'm surprised that you wrote it for me. I never expected such an amazing story and I can't thank you enough or tell you how much it means to me. :) I can't wait to see more of your writing as well. All of your stories are absolutely amazing. :)
Dasha, I have loved this story since the first chapter and I still can't believe you're writing it for me. It's just an incredible story, and I love how it has both Corey and Zacky in it. It's definitely an emotional story, and I'm glad that Kayla ended up choosing Zacky, because she truly loves him and he truly loves her, and that's the way it should always be.
Dasha! Dude, that was the sexiest sex scene I've ever seen in a story...seriously. It was so hot and romantic and intimate and I wanted to turn away because it was such a private moment...but that's the beauty of this story, I didn't have to turn around. I think I must have read this chapter four times before I commented at least, if not more. I love it so much and I can't wait to see the next chapter. :D
Dasha! This was so absolutely incredible and gorgeous. I love the way that he's trying to win her over without being obvious about it. He's not misleading her by any means, but he's being sublte and....gentlemanly, and I freaking love that. I think it's absolutely amazing, and I think that you're one of the best, most underrated writers on Mibba. This story is just one of the incredible things you've ever written, and I definitely can't wait.
Dasha, might I say that this quite possibly could be the most epic thing you've ever written? And not just because it's for me, either. I love the whole '40s style thing, especially during that era of history, and I absolutely love the fact that it'll be more than a one-shot. You didn't have to do that, and I love you for it. :D Also, I think that you've got the emotion and heart nailed perfectly in this. It's so stunning and vibrant, and I absolutely love it. <3