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  • Frank_Iero

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    okay so ive begun reading all your stuff. and this is just as perfect as the other story. you are suuuuchhhh a good writer its crazy
    February 7th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • TexasChainsawGirl

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    OMG This story is amazing! It's so hot I almost fainted XD U shud really update it! It's is very detailed and alluring. Ur an amazing writer!!!^_^xoxox
    June 30th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • all time perv.

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    you wanna know what I think? I think this is a fucking awesome. seriously.
    I don't stand a chance in the contest against your entry; and I'm serious. this was one of the sweetest, most beautiful things ever. and I mean this :3

    xo
    June 8th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • O.o?

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    That was EXCELLENT. like, legitimately, I've never read anything that raw and emotional that was still well-written and had a great story line. Much approval, madame.
    June 7th, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • DryIce.

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    NNNNNHHHHHHNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGNNNNGGGGGGGG
    Ugh.
    Face is truly melted.
    THAT WAS SO AMAZING. AND LIKE SO TOTALLY NNHHNNGGG.
    Aguh.
    So sweet at the end with the roses and the second round of sex and nnnhhhnnggggg.
    That was just actually beautiful and the fluff made me want to cry with happiness. Omg it was just so beautiful. This had to be my favourite part:

    “how about we clean up the mess and make breakfast together, I’ll just have to make sure I’m here when you wake up tomorrow night,” Frank winked at him and set about picking up the broken pieces from the floor. Gerard watched him, smiling to himself, picking up the broken pieces off the floor, he didn’t get any cuts or scrapes on his own delicate skin. Just like he negotiated the broken pieces of Gerard.

    Such a stroke of genius to liken Gerard to the cup, it was such a pretty and unique way to get fluff across if I had no conscious what so ever I'd steal it because it's that damn awesome, but I'm not like that. xD Thank you ever so much for dedicating this to me, I'm so pleased to say that something so beautiful is mine!

    <3
    xxx
    May 29th, 2011 at 03:52pm