Into His Arms - Comments

  • i defy you stars.

    i defy you stars. (250)

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    This was really interesting and sad. In a really weird way I wanted them to get together because Will cared a lot about Blaine but then he turned into a massive d-bag and I was like Blaine RUN RUN. So yeah, I really loved it, kuuuudos.
    May 13th, 2011 at 04:18pm
  • teen spirit.

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    If ever Blaine and Mr.Shue have a real conversation in Glee, I will think of this. Seriously
    The whole time, my reaction was mostly 'holy shit!' Because I don't think I've ever read something like this. I've read slash, I've read smut, blah blah blah, but this was just on a whole other level.

    Your details were just amazing, and how you could portray the emotions that Blaine felt were really amazing. The vocabulary you used in this was also very nice, as always. I'm going to mention the layout, which was nice. It wasn't too hard to read in.

    The way you just gave like, two personalities to Mr. Shue was incredible. I absolutely loved that.

    Amazing one-shot. (: <3
    April 30th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • Fantasy Monroe

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    Wow...I'm lost for words
    I'm not a Glee fan but this was wow!
    Everything was very well detalied, not so over the stop that it ruin the story.
    I like how you used a third person also, which not alot of people know how to do so well.
    This was very good, I really like this.
    Overall great one-shot :)
    April 29th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • AllySmith

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    I'm not a fan of glee but this is brilliantly writen :P
    April 29th, 2011 at 07:01pm
  • champion;

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    Wow.

    This hit me like a ton of bricks (and I know one of my favorite bands used that in lyrics but I can't remember which. How infuriating.)

    Sorry. Off topic.

    I've never watched Glee, so this is a bit... original to me, if that makes sense. And I wanna just punch Schuester in the face. HARD.

    You put great detail into this, and it had great flow, not too fast. I liked how you used third person ominiscent, which is the teller knows all thoughts, not just a single characters.

    This parts going to be random, but I love that you used the word 'iridescent'. It's a beautiful word and the name of my favorite song of all time.

    Anyways, great job!
    April 28th, 2011 at 10:04pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    Wow that was...odd.

    I feel so bad for Blaine. Your detail is stunning, no surprise there. I liked how this flowed and wasn't too fast.

    Don't forget the very last period after 'yet' haha:)

    Gread job!
    April 24th, 2011 at 08:11pm